And now, I present ~Beyond the Barricade~ Part 3..... But first I need to have a disclaimer:
I have a feeling a lot of you won't like my portrayal of Courfeyrac in the Part. Bear with me, it is all part of my plan for this story. I read somewhere "A good book doesn't give-up all its secrets at once". Please don't give up on my story, there will be more to this part of the storyline, you've just got to keep reading.
So here it is, ~Beyond the Barricade~
~Beyond the Barricade~ Part Three
Cosette and Marius returned from their mid-afternoon
stroll. Cosette had convinced her husband to tell their daughter about the June
Rebellion and his time at the Barricade. As they entered the house, it was
unnaturally quiet. It seemed as if no one was home. A letter was placed the
banister, addressed to both of them. Marius reached out to seize the letter
while Cosette called,
"Angeline?
Angeline, we're home!"
Cosette glanced at her husband who had suddenly gone
pale. A hand was thrust over his mouth.
"Darling, what on earth is the matter? You look as
if you've seen a ghost!" Cosette inquired, getting quite anxious when
silence answered her calls.
"She's
gone." He mumbled.
"What? Who is gone?" Cosette asked, hoping he
did not mean who she thought he meant. When he didn't answer, just stood there,
getting paler by the second, she practically yelled, "WHO IS GONE,
MARIUS?"
"Angeline has left home. Here, take it." He
muttered, handing her the epistle. She read it, scanning each letter of each
word carefully. When she finished, she fell to the floor, crying hysterically.
"I knew we shouldn't have left her! I knew there
was something wrong while we were out, I could feel it in my stomach. That is
why I wanted to return. And now we are too late." She cried, barely
intelligible. Marius bent down and wiped
the tears from her face. She noticed he had tears streaming down his face as
well.
"What are we going to do?" She sobbed.
"The only thing to do: wait."
*****
Angeline walked the streets of Paris. She hoped to find
the first of the men's families that night. She glanced down at the list of
names she copied down from her father's book. She had gone to the courthouse,
where there was a list of all inhabitants of Paris, at least the ones who owned
a houses. There she had found someone by the name of Maria Molyneux. Her
address was in the slums of Paris and Angeline was quite anxious to travel down
there. She hadn't thought that the families of these men could be poor. She had
always thought them rich young students, but obviously that wasn't the case.
They came from poor, tired families who wanted deliverance from the poor, tired
lifestyle. After cautiously walking for what seemed like miles, Angeline
arrived at the house of Maria Molyneux. She held her breath, hesitated, then knocked.
After a several moments, the door opened. The person who had unbolted the door
was a woman. A tired, haggard woman who was at one time very beautiful. She
didn't look hard and mean like some underprivileged women, but fatigued. She
looked like a mother figure, someone who you could tell your problems to and
she wouldn't judge, for she had made the same mistakes.
"Hello,
I am looking for a Maria Molyneux." Angeline said, not looking the woman
directly in the eye. Angeline felt nervous and shy.
"I am
she. Who's asking?" The woman replied, looking suspicious.
"I'm here to ask about a Courfeyrac Molyneux, one
who died in the June Rebellion. I am Angeline Pontmercy, I believe you know my
father?" Maria replied.
"You are Baron Pontmercy's daughter?"The woman
asked.
"Yes, I am."
"Then come in."
Angeline entered the house. It was small, had almost no
furnishing, yet it felt like home. It was neat and tidy.
"Why are you here, Mademoiselle? Why didn't you ask
your father about Courfeyrac?" The woman, Maria, asked.
"He won't tell me anything of his time at the
Barricade. I thought maybe he told you. I want to know his experiences. Know
who his friends were."
"He did tell me, yes. Just ask, I'll answer."
Maria said with a smile.
"Who was Courfeyrac? Was he your husband? Your
brother?" Angeline asked.
"Neither. We were lovers." The woman sighed,
becoming eighteen in her head again. She remembered that time in her life like
no other. It had been the one time she was truly happy.
"Then why do you have his last name, if you don't
mind my asking?"
"I changed it after I learned he had died. I've
never loved a man since."
"I want to know your story. The story of Courfeyrac
and yourself." Angeline inquired.
"Well, we met in 1831. I fell completely in love
with him. I've always liked to believe he loved me too. But he was a lustful
young man in Paris, where he could have whomever he pleased. Still, I like to
think that I was different from the rest. Special. He would come by every once
in a while. He made me feel like a Queen. Then, after June of 1832, he stopped
coming. I had known he was at a Barricade, so I assumed the worst. A month
later, your father came and informed me that my suspicions were true. He's been
sending us money ever since." Maria explained.
"Us?" Angeline asked, confused.
"Myself and my son, Chandler."
"And is Chandler's father...."
"Yes, his father was Courfeyrac." Maria said,
her eyes looking down at her lap. Even after 22 years since her son's birth the
shame humiliated her. But it didn't matter. She didn't know what she would do
without her son.
"Well, thank you so much, Madame, for telling me
about your experiences. Did my father tell you much about the time on the
Barricade?" Angeline asked.
"No, not much. Just that Courfeyrac was one of the
first to die, that he was shot by the National Guard."
"Oh. Well, thank you again. I must be going."
Angeline said and headed for the door.
"Now wait. You aren't going home, are you? I can
tell. I was once sixteen."
"I'm planning on finding the families of the other
men on the barricade." Angeline explained.
"Not tonight. Your father has provided for me for
over 22 years, and now I'm going to repay the favor. It's almost 8 o'clock. You're
going to stay here tonight and then tomorrow you can go on your way. But with
one requirement. My son goes with you." Maria said, firmly.
"Your son?" Angeline asked. Yes, she was a
sheltered young girl but she knew that some young men, epically ones from the
poorer areas, were not always gentlemen.
"Yes, my son. He has always ignored everything I've
ever told him about his father. Maybe if he learned about his father's friends
and how he died, perhaps he won't be so negative. Don't worry, Chandler is very
well behaved. He's not home now, though. He'll be back tomorrow."
"Very well. Thank you for your hospitality,
Madame."
"The pleasure is all mine. You honestly remind me
of myself as a young girl. Hopefully not so rebellious, though." Maria
said with a smile. Angeline felt strangely at home in this run-down shack of a
house.
I know you said most people wouldn't like your portrayal of Courfeyrac but I think that his having a child would be a very probable thing. Can't wait for the next one. :)
ReplyDeleteSee, that's what I was thinking! I mean, Victor Hugo practically descibes him as a Felix Tholomyes! I'm glad you liked it! I am in the middle of working on the fourth part, expect it by Monday or Tuesday!
DeleteThat's exactly what I was thinking when I read this. Victor Hugo had no shame describing the boys personalities. And I know everyone wants to think they were complete 100% stand up guys who never did anything wrong but they were all human and they did have their lovers. Yes, I'm super excited to hear about how you write about Enjolras parents.
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